My city :)

Hi,

I would like to show my new city.
Please don't steal any ideas..
any comments, good or bad, are welcome.
If they are bad, tell me why and wich one.

* I know that the grass around the city isn't detailed.. I haven't mapped there yet.
* I know that the houses aren't detailed yet, i still have to do that.
* It looks like you can walk from a depot to another depot, but you can't. anyway, I've changed it so it doesn't look like you can walk trought it.
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Overview of city:



Mountain:



South "entrance" via a mountain:



Other mountain:



And another mountain:



Still watching? getting bored?
Graveyard:



Bank ground floor:



Bank upper floor:



If you read this you are noob.
Some Houses:



Temple ground floor:



For the people with xbox live, my gamertag is: I SuRv1vOr I
[ i surv1vor i ]
Temple upper floor:



Minimap:


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Thanks for watching!

yours,
SuRv1vOr

O.O very nice mappings..
I hope I could map like u

Indeed really nice!
Loved you mountains around the city.
One thing I noticed is the DP.
It looks awesome like that, really private, but there is a mistake there...
Inside the DP, when you walk to your DP box, you can walk to the other one without getting out of that cabbin... I mean, theres a wall missing in every cabbin...
Dunno if you get my point...


But keep it up!

C ya

@ Bleach
Thx, this was my first showoff, I've never showed my works, because i didn't know how to upload them .
How I learned it?

-I was looking at showoffs every day. Not for ideas, but to see how the other people map, and what the other players like to see.
-I readed all the tutorials.


@ Bruce
ok thx, I fixed it.
you couldn't walk trought it, i checked that with RME, but it looked like you could so i changed it^^

@ All
if anyone finds anything what's wrong or something, please say it^^

Sure.... I like your town, and i prefere your mountains around the town They are looking rly nice! But maybe you could edit them to some bigger mountains, when you edit the other tuff around the city.

And...
Add some mossy~ walls
Add some little grass-stuff on the parvments (I hope you know what i mean; the little stuff that you add ON the grass!)

ok, thanks for your comments basti, i'll see what i can do^^

and with the mossy walls, do you mean the walls of the houses, or the mountain walls? or both?

both

the 'door' for the depot is really small (in lenght), you can put just the "roof" part, will become better (for me :p).

Really good the mapping, but don't understand why the 2 depots :O

well, maybe a bit more original?
I've never seen one like this. But the idea with the 1 dp to the other is a bit ripped from sinteria, but this isn't really a second dp.

Ok, really original

But if you do a road between the two "depots" will be better, will sound like: "We need more space and have a free place there, whatabout made there and make a safe passage from here to there? How man!? By a second floor of course!"

well, a road under that bridge.. the road will be too small if you compare it with the other roads.. and it is very hard to see that there's a road if you come from the left.. so I'll leave it like this:) they can still use it as a road

oh and uhm... I didn't get the last sentence, so i won't give a reaction to it:P sorry

That depot idéa is awsome! Keep it up.