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Survivor Great User
Number of posts : 130 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-04-10
| Subject: The Beginning of The End. Fri Apr 25, 2008 5:57 pm | |
| Part I: The end.
Location: Pentagon. Date: 27-08-2010. 14:30
General Usaid:,,All our greatest leaders are here together, and there is nobody, I repeat, Nobody who has tried to attack us, you know why? The whole world knows we have serious problems and we are their only hope, we, and the army!" Scientist Luke:,,Objection sir! We aren't attacked because this meeting is top secret! And another question; How were you thinking to stop the nature with the army? The nature, sir, is our mother! If she wants this, it happens and there will be no way to stop it!" *Gunshot!*
Scientist Luke:,,Aaarrggh, whhhy? General Usaid:,,It would happen anyway! If it wouldn't happen by me, it would happen by te nature!" *Gunshot!!*
Location: Egypt. Date: 27-08-2010 14:43
*Aaaargh, help me!* *Urgh, the gas, it is killing me!* Wedney Oakwood:,, Hurry up people, the ground is breaking! This pyramide is the stablest in the area!" The survivors went into the pyramide, without knowing why. Why should they enter the pyramide? There is no hope anymore, or am I wrong? They went down and down and down untill the heat was gone. Why, why was the heat gone? There were vulcanos all over the world, but it wasn't heat at 200 feet below the ground? After walking a bit more, passing scary chests and spiders, it started to get cold. Wedney Oakwood:,, Don't worry people, we made it this far, maybe there is hope for us! Don't be scared about the temperature, it can be because of the ground water." A survivor:,, I can't take it any more! The walls, there are coming closer! Aaarghh!" The survivor ran away, past the edge and the screaming was gone. Everyone got scared, what could it be? A mummy? Has a mummy ate the survivor? No! Mummys don't even exist! But what could it be beside a mummy? Everyone started to think and getting scared. Wedney Oakwood:,, Let's go check it out! we can't stay here forever, waiting for the lava to burn us! I will go first." Wedney went to the edge, slowly. She past the edge and got blast to the end of the tunnel. Something was sucking her to it! She was trying to get away from it, but it wasn't possible! Her voice, clothes, eyes, hair got all suck into this creepy thing! What could it be! she couldn't look without eyes but hey, she had no pain!? How is that possible?! It was getting colder, colder and colder. There was strong wind, water, earth, everything! How could that be underground? It went so cold that she got under conscience.
Location: Unknown. Date: Unknown.
Wedney woke up in a warm bed, with a wooden cup of tea next to her bed. Wedney Oakwood:,,Ahh, a bad dream, just as I thought!" She took the cup of tea and started to drink. Wedney Oakwood:,,Huh, what! A wooden cup of tea!?" she took the old, dirty clothes next to her bed and ran outside. *Witch! Witch! Witch!* Why was everybody acting so weird? Was it real? The pyramide, the end of the world, was it all real?! But, How could she survive it? What happend that day in the pyramide?
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Part II: All the awnsers.
She couldn't remember it, but was it so important at this moment? Yes, it was important, but all those strange and old fashioned people who were yelling and threwing food at here were more important at this moment! She looked around, looking for something, or someone to escape, but the only thing she was focusing on were the people. Wedney Oakwood: ,,Please people! I am not a bad person! I don't even know how i came here!" *Die! Die! Die!* A survivor: ,,Girl, get over here!" Wedney was looking around, but she couldn't see where the voice came from. A survivor:,,Under you!" Wedney looked down, and saw a hole. That must be the voice! But should she jump into it? It could be a trap. She had no other choice so she jumped into the hole. All the people were trowing stones into the hole, but no one jumped in. Wedney Oakwood: ,,Thanks! Thank you so much! Why should you help me? Aren't you like the others?" A survivor: ,,No, It is a long story, but I can't tell you who I am, for my and your safety. But can you tell me why they think you are a witch?" Wedney Oakwood: ,,No, sorry. I have no idea how I came here. I had a bad dream, that the world was exploding and when I woke up, i was here!" A survivor: ,,So you are a survivor from the end!? Thank god! You are so lucky! There are 8 survivors, and you, are one of them! Follow me to my hideout, I will explain it." Wedney followed the survivor to his place. She had so many questions! Why are there just 8 survivors? How did I get to this place? What happend to our world? She had to wait for these questions. A survivor: ,,Wedney, get back!" Wedney was scared and ran back. A survivor: ,,A rotworm! Don't be scared, they can't hurt you. They only hurt you if you get too close to them. than they will suck you in the ground and you will get burried alive!" Wedney and the survivor past the rotworm, without getting attention of it. When they arived at the hideout, they started to talk. A survivor: ,,Well, I am General Usaid, but you can call me Usa." Wedney Oakwood: ,,Nice to meet you Usaid, or Usa. Could you explain me this whole thing now please?" Wedney didn't know General Usaid, and didn't know that he killed one of the smartest people of earth, who could help the world to survive. Usaid: ,,Ok. the first thing you have to forget is, earth. Earth is gone, destroyed by mother nature, with our help. Another thing, it wasn't yesterday, but 1 year ago. The survivors, entered a teleporter. -Wait! Let me continue!- You got also suck in one of these. They are huge portals, sended by god to resque people from the end. They all teleported to a village, and you got teleported to Oakwood City. Created by Jack Oakwood. the first one who entered a teleporter." Wedney: ,,That, that can't be true! My father died 30 years ago when he was exploring a cave, but the cave wasn't stable enough for his pick axe so it all came down!" Usaid: ,,No, he was the first who found a teleporter! he also burried this sword, the most powerfull sword, for someone named Wedney Oakwood! Look at the top, you can read: Dear Wedney. Wedney didn't know what to say. It was such a beautifull sword." Usaid: ,,this sword, the sword of Valour, is the only sword what can defeat the appocolypse! The appocolypse is in the hands of The Dark Lord, the most powerfull sorcerer of this world! He is trying to get world domination! This sword is the only sword what can defeat him, and you are the only one who can activate the powers of this sword! Take it!" Wedney took the sword of Valour, and activated the power! Usaid knew that this would happen, but usaid didn't know that the power of Wedney would also increase by activating the sword. Usaid: ,,Hahaha fool! Thanks for activating the sword, could you please die now?" *Gunshot!* Usaid shot Wedney in her body, and wedney got under consience.
Location: Oakwood City. Date: 28-08-2011. 23:55
Wedney woke up. She was stuck in a stair, in the middle of the town. Wedney: ,,What is this!?" Usaid: ,,This, Wedney, Is the end of your life, and the end of this world! Muahahaha!" A strong wind was coming. You could here something in it. *Good work Usa..* Usaid: ,,Thank you, My Lord!"
------------------------------------------------------------------ Part III: The meeting.
Wedney: ,,Why Usaid, why have you betrayed me? Why do you choose a crazy warlock above me?" Usaid: ,,Because my Lord can win this war! If my Lord wins this war, I will be a boss of this world, together with my Lord!" The wind was getting stronger and stronger. The roofs were falling off the houses, the windows started to break and everywhere were stones, twigs and trees in the air! It was some sort of tornado around the middle of the village and they were in it! Everything was flying around them, but she was still stuck in that chair! Usaid: ,,Now you can see that my Lord is not a crazy warlock! He is the most powerfull warlock of this world!" Wedney was getting scared. She thought she saw something in te tornado! No, there was something in the tornado! It was getting closer and closer, untill she saw that it was a face. It flew into wedney! She started to feel weird. Wedney: ,,What is happening! The pain! It hurts!" *Aaarggh!* Usaid: ,,This is the power of my Lord!" *Muahaha!!* Wedney's skin was turning white, her eyes were starting to bleed and she felt very angry! She couldn't control herself anymore! She cutted herself out of the chair and walked to Usaid. Usaid couldn't run, because there they were inside the tornado. Usaid: ,,My lord, is that you!?" Wedney: ,,Yes, Usaid." Usaid: ,,Oh, thank God! I thought you was -*AAArghh!!*-" Wedney cutted his body open with her nailes, took his hearth out of him and ate it! Wedney: ,,Sorry Usaid, you have done your job, now you are worthless." Wedney took the sword of valour and smashed Usaid in the tornado. It was getting darker and darker. A storm was coming too. Wedney was heading to the graveyard, where her father was burried. She went downstairs to the coffin, and opened it. She saw her father. It was like a mummy, but when she saw his face, she started to think about the good times she had with her father before the end of the world, all the parks she went to, the movies she saw. With all those good feelings she was trying to get The Dark Lord out of her mind. With succes! The Dark Lord left her body, and she ran to the exit. *You won't get out of here...* The door closed! Where could The Lord be? She couldn't see him, the only thing she saw was a big room, with a dirt floor and blood at the walls. Well, there was something, but that was the coffin of her dad. Wedney: ,,Huh, what was that!?" The coffin was opening itself. How could that happen? Her dad died 30 years ago! Jack Oakwood was getting out of the coffin. Jack oakwood: ,,Baby, i't is me! Your daddy." Wedney: ,,No! You are The Dark Lord!" Jack Oakwood: ,,Baby, what do you mean! Please, believe me! Wedney went to her dad, very slowly. She was scared, but at the other side happy if it realy was her dad. She cudlled her dad. She was so happy to hold her dad, her dad, who died 30 years ago! Her tears were falling at the dark ground. What did she saw now!? The ground under her dad was dark, it looked like the ground of hell! Wedney was getting scared and wated to push her father away, but she couldn't. Her dad was holding her to tight. Wedney: ,,Dad! Let me go!" Jack: ,,You are coming with me, in this coffin!" Wedney: ,,Nooo!" She took the sword of valour and cutted his head off. She saw the Dark Lord leaving his body and her dad felt at the ground. She heard something when The Dark Lord left. *Nice to meet you..* Wedney: ,,Dad! Dad talk to me! Please dad! Don't leave me alone! Daddy awnser me!" Jack Oakwood wasn't awnsering. Wedney: ,,I will get you, Dark Lord!!" She burried the body of her dad back in the coffin and walked outside. The whole village was destroyed. The weather was turning back to normal and all the people were getting out of their houses again. *There is the witch!* A kid: ,,Wait! She has the sword of valour! She is our legend, the Legend of oakwood!" All the people started to talk. *Oh, she has the sword!-Look the sword has been activated!-yes she looks..-Maybe we-Yesterday it was-* An old man: ,, Quiet people, quiet. Hello Wedney, I am your fathers best friend, Frank Clain. He told me about you. We have a question, do you want to join our village and help us rebuilding it?" Wedney: ,,Off course i will. But I also have a question. I fought with The Dark Lord and he is ways more powerfull than me. I can't defeat him without training, do you have someone to help me?" *The Dark Lord-Did you hear-Oh my God she-* Frank Clain: ,,Quiet people! So the Dark Lord is still alive? Well, than you are our only hope! I think Grimgor the Brute is the best to help you, but he is in Gen'Ial, the dwarven city. Here is a map of our world, as you can see, the big mountain at the right is Gen'Ial. It will be hard to get there, but Grimgor is worth it!" Wedney: ,,Ok, thanks for your help. I will head to Gen'Ial now!" Wedney walked toward Gen'Ial without knowing what is out there. Shall she survive it? Who could Grimgor be? Why is his nickname The Brute?
Last edited by Survivor on Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:12 pm; edited 14 times in total (Reason for editing : part III) | |
| | | Bruce Admin
Number of posts : 175 Registration date : 2008-04-03
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Fri Apr 25, 2008 8:20 pm | |
| Holy crap! Pretty nice! =P I couldnt see the connection between the first and the second story, or even if they have any connection, but wow, I loved it! It looks like a movie script! =P
Keep it up and post more parts! =P
C ya | |
| | | Bleach User
Number of posts : 88 Age : 32 Registration date : 2008-04-12
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:05 am | |
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| | | Milosovitch Great User
Number of posts : 125 Age : 30 Registration date : 2008-04-04
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:19 am | |
| Pretty neat keep it up | |
| | | Survivor Great User
Number of posts : 130 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-04-10
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:24 am | |
| @ bruce well, they are connected. If you have read the location and date, you can see it happens at the same time, but at other locations. The meeting is in the pentagon, and in other countrys like egypt it is allready started.
@ all I've made a story in our time because all the stories are allways in the stone age, or around 1500..
I have made a second part.. | |
| | | Bleach User
Number of posts : 88 Age : 32 Registration date : 2008-04-12
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:22 pm | |
| ok can't u post the second part?? | |
| | | Survivor Great User
Number of posts : 130 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-04-10
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:44 pm | |
| The second part is pasted under the first.. As you can see it is a bit bigger now.. Sorry for that, I'll announce it next time. 3th part is added too, so if you are bored, you can check it out ;>
yours, SuRv1vOr | |
| | | Basti Great User
Number of posts : 118 Age : 32 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:50 pm | |
| WOw xD Holy shit. How nice is this?! Keep goin' dude | |
| | | Bleach User
Number of posts : 88 Age : 32 Registration date : 2008-04-12
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sun Apr 27, 2008 2:01 pm | |
| Wow, Keep editing it man very great work buddy | |
| | | Heer Karel Advanced User
Number of posts : 293 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-04-04
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat May 17, 2008 4:39 am | |
| uhh, nice story, guess I like it | |
| | | Heer Karel Advanced User
Number of posts : 293 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-04-04
| Subject: Re: The Beginning of The End. Sat May 17, 2008 5:13 am | |
| - Niborz wrote:
- Mapping Academy, Mapping Society, Mapping Club.
And doesn't have to contain ot/tibia/open tibia/otserv ehh? wrong board maybe? | |
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